Replacement (Part 4)
#5 of replacement as with the rest, revised and tighter. thank you all! if ever you would like a part 5, just say the word. thanks everyone. check out stone and wolf for adventure, magic, and intrigue.
A Dark History, A New Story... (Prologue)
#1 of a dark history, a new story greetings sofurrians, i had posted this a long time ago but i decided to revise it and perfect it as much as i could, so here it is. it's the first story i've written as a pastime.
Valkyrie - Book 1 - Chapter 3 - The Girl (Revised Edition)
#3 of valkyrie - book 1 - fate and rebirth (revised and reedited) chapter 3 - the girl location: phoenix grace main office - chentrilla city "how many times have i go to tell you?" sighed diamond irritated.
Outfoxed
I would like to thank pyke darkewoulfe for proof reading and revising this story. basicly a guy into arctic fox, enjoy. tzell -= outfoxed =- the first thing adam noticed in his drugged state was the air.
Like a Cauldron Burning [Prologue]
Law enforcement and the atmosphere inside of a large urban-area police department is what i know from watching perry mason, columbo, and a slew of 1970's cop films [good source materials, though a bit outdated]; if anybody has advice to give, i'll happily revise
Reckoning
"let's revise our policy. we don't harm ladies, but we hurt bitches!" kardonyth cried. "enough!" acorech shouted. "do not be a hypocrite! we cannot turn our backs on our morals and ideals, especially after everything we preached to the dragonslayers.
A Meeting
He was instantly likeable (though i was starting to consider revising that judgement), his easy-going manner warmed me to him as soon as i had met him, but everything else about him was a little odd.
Warm Up | 23 - Lost Then Found
"and for your first homework, please read the second chapter of earthean astronomy, tenth revision. it's about the origin of this reality. one more thing!"
After the Storm - Part 26 [Curious Kids]
Note: i didn't proofread this before posting so there might be spelling error, character error, grammatical errors, or continuity errors due to the recent revision of the previous chapter. all that aside, i hope you like it.
The Life of Another - Chapter 19
"we've been discussing the matter and decided our initial impression needs revising.
Hero, Chapter 6 - And into the Frying Pan
Edit: this chapter is undergoing revisions. if you're wondering who artaaga is, she's a poorly written character who is being replaced by blyth the goat. reya couldn't speak. it was like something out of a nightmare.
Against All Odds: Part 6 - Close Encounters
The text did originally start out with '30mins', but had to be revised by the time he'd finally decided against including an 'x' at the end of the message.