Contest Entry: Tron Skates (Gluepaw)
He even went out of his way to help carlson revise his blueprints to correspond with the updated shoe, along with pointing out specific areas that would allow augmentation - stating that a device placed anywhere else would cause severe discomfort or the automation
Joined in Mind and Body - Chapter 5
I also need to review all data records from the duration of the fault and potentially revise a lot of information, now that my processing systems are not clouded by lust."
NanoWrimo: Flexible Survival 5/?
(gets you all revisions as the story progresses, available in all popular ebook formats, only 99 cents): https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/101172?ref=dmsilver we emerged onto telegraph in the murky grays of morning.
Descendant: Chapter 3; New Developments
For now there was some much needed revision if he was ever going to communicate with star, or any other pokémon for that matter in pokéspeak without completely embarrassing himself.
The DogBoys: A Non-Sexual Interlude
Slight revisions to syntax, grammer, as well as minor changes to content to bring it up-to-speed and consistent with where the series has gone in my brain. see previous stories in the series for forword.
Kovalinkt story (surface): The Rainbow wing
Exclaimed the rainbow wing on the radio, before pushing the throttle of their dual engine aircraft to the maximum, their brand new and revised engines sending them like bullets to their targets.
Pride Podcast
"give me a break liberal, don't you have history to revise?" "yeah chase, won't you say that sydney and tj are just really good friends?" carl said, pretty much cackling.
Series Finale (A1, B11, Epilogue)
I need to revise the whole first act, so that i can prep it for publication! thanks for reading! now is your chance to try and make suggestions to me, so that i can take them into consideration when doing the revisions!
Jon Mahon Chronicles
I wrote this back in like 2009 then revised and extended it later. jon mahon quotes: "hey mahon! none of that, please!" "of course they don't approve of jon mahon. nobody does" "i want to meet this jon mahon" "jon mahon!
Task Force - Weapon Specs (revised)
This isn't a real chapter. I've been working on the Special Assignments Team's weapons and decided to post the specs so you guys can get an idea of what they're working with. **C Series Sub Machine Gun (Jessica's...
A Bronze Rising: Out with the Old
I will revise the story at once!" tobias said, turning his horse about. i raised a paw, "not quite yet. i want you to summon a wood worker here first thing in the morning.
The Lead Crown: Ch 6c, Ghosts of the Past (Pt 3)
The wolf-dog quickly revised whatever he was going to say, "so... out the back?" sada nodded, "out the back."