Remember the Oath 3 - Bug Detected
Swiftly coming in close to strike it once again, the charmander knocked back the weedle who retaliated with a shot of string silk.
Off Leash Chapter 1
Doom in this case asking my father for money and the strings that would come with it. turning towards the door, i found the old man in my way, shuffling out towards it with an unsteady gait. i held the door for him once i squelched a flash of annoyance.
Ander - Part 6: Subchapter 88
._ kiana grabbed the horn and wrenched it from his grasp with such force it snapped the string around his neck. he looked at her with total shock, blinking at the suddenness of it all. "kiana, what -!?"
The Slayer and the Sphinx: Chapter Fifteen
Then, smiling, he threw the one he hadn't tied to the string into the night. immediately, the second pebble leaped from his fingers, trying to chase after the one he'd thrown. only the string he'd tied around it kept it from escaping.
Burdens - Chapter 86: Sanctuary
They all converged at different points and split at others, like a tangle of string. what was best? roger spoke of college and work, and even he did not know what exactly to do.
Arvians - Little Lamb
She kept her short bow in her paws and with an arrow resting against the string, as she had since she entered these lands.
Hidden: Chapter 15
I replayed the image of me tearing him apart, his screaming, his blood, crane sitting in the chair like a puppet with no strings.
Lonely Oak Chapter 42
The pole had a long, elastic string in it that made it snap together as long as she lined it up right. she had hers put together only a few links after ket, and he took it from her.
Dirty Laundry. Chapter Sixteen.
While logan was seemingly oblivious to the strings being pulled from behind. the rat wished had the courage to cut those strings so logan could see how it really was and who he needed to really keep an eye on.
Writing Tips
Avoid using numbers as part of your writing (unless it's a really long string of digits.) it's not strictly improper, but it doesn't look as good as typing it out as a word. also, avoid editing as you write!
Barred: Chapter 6
He then tugged on mac's apron strings and loosened them. "don't tie your apron so damn tight if you're trying to hide that fact."
The Sound of Love Chapter 2
Taking a few good strums of her strings, that low twang of each one. the strums became plucks of the strings, slowly a rhythm began to form. picking up in pace, her dexterous fingers plucking and strumming the thick metal strings.