A Trainer's Tale - Chapter 35
"there was someone that mentioned this in passing while i was training in the monastery, master.
Texas (Wendell)
I'll have to ask her about that since she never once mentioned this to me. i always thought she wanted a younger brother. after all, she is very close to me. but, then again, i too have always wondered what it's like to have an older sibling.
No Light to be Seen: Chapter 18
I didn't want to do it because i couldn't even think to do it without my gag reflex kicking in, not to mention the danger i would be putting myself in.
Ch 5: Kisses and Heartache
She mentioned something about her being a traditionalist so she wasn't going to pay for it; we ended up calling it early.
Burdens - Chapter 40: Ripples in the Pond
Though, he might give mention of the things they had done, and maybe mary might think it was odd, as roger already felt it was. but no, he had mentioned to the wolf to keep such things betwixt themselves.
Integration: Part Seven
She debated mentioning to mitchell that he guessed correctly about dylan and his home issue. in fact he was scarily correct. it made her wonder if he already knew. she decided against saying anything, however.
Warehouse Conversion
Ethan chuckled as well, "not to mention that we got a fine house with a small price out of it, i'd say this is a huge bonus."
In My Time of Need - Chapter 9
I heard the guys' names but nobody ever mentioned her name." i asked curiously. "that's christina, she's the technical leader of their little group.
Writing Tips vol. 2
As i've already mentioned, direct thoughts are a big help. you also want to indicate what the characters are feeling. the more descriptive you are of their thoughts and emotions, the stronger the connection becomes.
Refuge - Prologue
Oh, right, i forgot to mention something pretty important. i'm your typical male werewolf - tail, paws, fluffy fur and all! the ones chasing me? they're also werewolves - my pack. well, they were my pack...my family. now, they just want me dead.
Virgin Virus - Ch23: Relinquish
- - "oh... must've been his friend." - oscar mentioned, looking thoughtful and worried. - "doctor... what do you mean?"
City of Light: Chapter 3
Hand to chin he sifted through all his training, not once had the green dragon lyyreth made mention of this. it couldn’t be true.