Joined in Mind and Body - Chapter 14
He had taken the improvements in serina's eyes and improved on them further and it had been wildly successful. distractingly so. he was able to make out a much wider range of the spectrum now, his vision extending into infrared and ultraviolet.
54 - On The Job
Luckily, the only ingredients they have here won't make the powder much stronger, so they won't get a big advantage when i make an improvement.'
#1 Today I died
> > (edit: i am constantly improving my writing as i work on this story, and as such i keep noticing new errors, mistakes and pieces i need to change. there are bound to be many new edits long after i publish a chapter as i improve further.
Ember and Flare 1
Nbsp; to be continued \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_ comments please it helps me improve
A Galaxy Divided
"in a sense, first off were going to do a over haul, use a few experimental chemicals, improving muscle mass, bone density, increase reaction time, improve eye sight, and sense of smell.
Hope and Dreams part 18
But even arron noticed this sad sack was an improvement from the previous hollow shell. as depressing as it was, feeling something, even feeling sadness, was an improvement from feeling nothing, even if it doesn't always seem that way.
A Giant Problem III
He's been putting his money into all sorts of causes for the giants, trying to improve the situation it seems." i snorted. "that's not very likely from all i've seen.
Wolf Moon Chapter 1
#2 of wolf moon \*note\* don't be too harsh with comments just say what needs improvement.
The Ideal Furry
-doesn't resent the human race -doesn't depict "anthros" as the pinnacle of purity and overall good-guyness - accepts all forms of criticism no matter how harsh - honestly tries to improve their work - tries to finish their
4 - Mutt meets Gunther
What you need is an opportunity to improve yourself." "improve myself? well, i have been working on that. then they took all my things, so now i have to start all over." gunther laughed, "i am not talking about things. i am talking about you.
Loveless Incantation: Chapter 12
Excitement that she was improving. but that all gave way to something she didn't expect, and that was a wave of pain. it was only for a brief moment, but the pain that coursed through her was almost crippling.
Autumn Woods - Chapter Eleven
"i could definitely use a lot of improvement." "if you improve any better, you'll be surpassing me already," cloud replied. "paws are difficult to draw. i used my own paws as references to learn the curves and shape so that might help a bit for you."