The Leaves of Fall Act 2: Fear the Nobodies (Part 6)
\>Sam let’s out a panicked squeak, both his hands on the handle of the bat \>He swipes it to the right… \>… Catching his dad on the wrists with a louder-than-you-could-believe \*thunk\* \>Your jaw unhinges as you see Sam, his eyes glued shut, his...
The Leaves of Fall Act 2: Fear the Nobodies (Part 10)
\>”A-Anon?” \>You roll over in bed \>”I-I can’t s-sleep.” \>You groan, your eyes still glued shut \>Sam is just a dream, you say to yourself. A voice in the dark \>”I-I-It smells so strong in h-here,” he takes a sharp breath “So what...
The Leaves of Fall Act 2: Fear the Nobodies (Part 9)
\>Sam could not take it \>He spends the whole movie clinging to your arm so tightly you can physically feel blood returning to it once Batman dashes off into the night for his final scene \>Alex, being the beautiful, wonderful, intelligent, radiant...
Important Issues of Writing
I can never stand reading characters that are all "i wanna be all emo, dude, this beast that crawls in the dark and brooooods!" or "i kill not because i must but because i can".
The Leaves of Fall Act 2: Fear the Nobodies (Part 13)
\>Stella whips her head behind her \>The badger freezes, and then jams a finger in Sam’s direction and snarls \>”Sam, you stay far away from that crystal, you hear me? You’re not a level six Lazer Lotus. You touch it and I’ll have your ears hanging...
The Leaves of Fall Act 2: Fear the Nobodies (Part 24)
\>What do you say? \>I mean, really, WHAT DO YOU SAY to this guy? \>You don’t say anything for a few moments, your mind spinning at a thousand miles-per-hour, mulling over every possible dialog choice \>A few hours earlier this guy was kicking...
The Leaves of Fall Act 3: Something That Matters (Part 19)
\>"You're right." \>A voice — too familiar to you — booms over the loudspeakers \>Vanessa \>The music abruptly cuts \>The rat behind the table looks up at you four, her eyes glowing red with fire \>Fuck \>How did you not see it before? ...
The Leaves of Fall Act 2: Fear the Nobodies (Part 12)
\>You know, this is kinda peaceful \>The sun is just starting to rise and come up over the bluffs \>There’s a type of dawn-stasis that’s got the whole world in a still, like a photograph, or a frame out of a movie \>That’s what this feels like ...
Gortoz 'A Ran - Ch 16 - A nudge in the right direction
I went from an hyperactive annoying brat to an overconfident bitch to an emo and whatever the hell that was in between it. but back when i was a teen, i often wondered who i really was. why life was taking such a big shit on me.
The Leaves of Fall Act 2: Fear the Nobodies (Part 5)
\>You are Sam \>And from the single window of your room, you watch the leaves of fall drop into the breeze, one by one, like little parachutes of autumn \>Your hips, butt, back and arms sting and are peppered with welts \>You tug your hoodie up...
The Leaves of Fall Act 3: Something That Matters (Part 12)
\>When at last you pull back from each other (you still shaking; hot air and steam dumping from your mouth), there's silence \>Sam quickly pivots her body to face away from you, but you can see the unbridled joy played out across her face \>Her ears...
The Leaves of Fall Act 2: Fear the Nobodies (Part 25)
\>You roll into the small parking lot of the church \>Ah yes, you've been here before, mainly with Mike and Alex to 'hunt ghosts' when you were younger \>You never found any ghosts but you did burn a couple thousand calories on the bike ride up the...