The City of The Night
The city has three old styled gothic churches, which have received clergy since their construction. the look one the priest's faces when some of the christian vampires first attended their services was priceless.
The edge
constructive criticism is welcome!
The twining roses
Please give me some constructive criticism and comments.
The twinning roses
Please give me some constructive criticism and comments.
You
Any constructive-criticism is welcome. ^_^ how many times must i tell you that i'm fine you always loved to point out every single flaw who are you to think that you are divine i'm going to be the first to say that your word is not law.
Chapter 4 - Tordakir
The city was much older then thaiden and the construction reflected that. rather then a combination of wooden and brick construction, tordakir seemed carved entirely out of stone.
Capsule - Prologue + Chapter 1
Keep the construction crew in the dark. on the surface, this shouldn't be odd, but if anyone were to dig below the topsoil, it would look very... fishy." alex finished, leaning back in his chair.
Dragon RP-Chat
I welcome constructive criticism,such as how to improve the environments or the stroylines,but if you give me hate i will block you lol. also guys,please don't sign up for the rp until at least the continent pangea campaign is up.
The Legend of Spyro: Path of Delusions Book IX Chapter 24
She looked over her shielded body, looked over the construct that served as her legs.
MF-Ep20-Training Yet again-
Axel had noticed that if times get tough he could help in the fighting by using his powers to create a construct of sorts so that the team could just use their weapons almost like using a makeshift bunker to deal double damage.
A Beast Learns To Live - Chapter 4
It seemed the construction crew was replacing the thatched roof. vilkas caught the human before the fire did too much damage to that house - shop, rather. merchants were prepping their stalls down that direction along the road.
My Secret to You... (sonnet)
constructive critizism is good critizism.