Commission: Corporate Ballroom (ShadowRun Story)
As he tossed the case he carried into the air it would quickly open and unfold, growing from the case and forming what looked to be a machine gun turret that quickly locked onto the girl.
Diner Shuffle (Otherwise Untitled)
I'm still on the case." ~ a pause, with only a tone of rage from the other end of the call audible into the room.
A song for....
\*i hand you the violin case\* ~n~\*takes the case and opens it looking at the cherry violin tearing up\* ~k~\*rests my head on yours\* ~n~\*i pull out the violin with you resting your head on me i fell welcome and at home....safe\* ~n~\*
Acquaintance
Has come up and i wanted to know if you would like to do it with me" " so you're asking me to come with you on your little witch hunt case detective thing?"
Bri [INTRO AND BACKSTORY]
Given the fact that gardevoirs tend to have a sharp stare and eye-structure, bri suffers from a severe case of 'resting bitch face'.
Writing Tips
In some cases, such as action, short sentences can work very well. in other cases, a longer sentence is better, but still needs the appropriate pauses. perspective matters. who's telling the story?
Scars Ch. 5
The shopkeeper slowly walks away from the register and goes to a glass display case, inside is a katana-like sword. the shopkeeper takes out a key from his pocket and puts it in the keyhole, turns it and opens the case.
Chaos, and other job descriptions- Part 1
In this case the shot was fired by a skinny rodent with greasy hair and medicated-looking eyes, holding a large pistol in one hand, and a small blue sphere in the other.
Herdnan- Chapter Three
Using care, he lifted the pane of glass from it's wooden slot in the case. he set this on the desk and reached in the open end of the case and lifted the sword from it's mooring. it was a great deal heavier than he was counting on.
Seekers: Chapter Twenty-Three: The End
Elise said lightly, smiling to me and opening the case. "this is what we've been fighting for." i looked down expectantly at the case. it wasn't exactly what i had expected. there were just cards; they looked like atm cards.
Seekers: Chapter Nineteen: The Raid
Elise grunted as she lifted up a large case hiding her large rifle; "we won't be killing anyone living." "that's not what i meant."
Hell on Earth. Chapter 7
With a sigh he opened the case, turning it over for side b. that was when he heard a distant cough and shuffle. someone else was here.