Starborne - Adrift in a Sea of Stars: Into the Light
"but you need to know that we have not yet arrived at beta phoenicis. we arecurrently still about 18 months away from reaching gaia. i had to fast-track theoriginal crew re-embodiment schedule - there is a situaton developing.
Isolation-Excerpt 17-Asphalt
"magellan version 11.0.22 beta loading", my suit said, "accessing memory files....restoring....ready." "nice to have you back magellan", i said with a smile pasted to my face.
A PYROMANIAC SKELETON, A NERDY FARMHAND, AND AN ACCIDENT-PRONE INTERIOR DECORATOR FALL IN LOVE IN A BIG OFFICE
This story was written by voice and you can hear him reading it at the end of episode 12 - beta got back. prompt - a pyromaniac skeleton, a nerdy farmhand, and an accident-prone interior decorator fall in love in a big office.
Character for Shadowrun Story: Franz
Lifestyle (1 month) augmentations: bioware: bone density (rating 2), orthoskin (rating 2, +2 ballistic and impact ratings), synaptic booster (rating 3), synthacardium (rating 2) cyberware: betaware skillwires (rating 3), delta skill expert system, beta
Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
I'll definitely save beta readers as a topic for a following piece, but to be brief here, the feedback of others will really help you spot the parts of your story that need improvement - and not just regarding showing or telling.
Kaotic beginnings - A Kaos Army story - Chapter 9
The dragon had warned that the pocket portals were still largely untested, being beta models, and until the whole system had undergone rigorous safety checks he was restricted to the main access points.
Evolution Part I: Chapter Twenty-nine
I growled a bit at my beta, "fatty, this is serious. we're a group so that we don't lose anyone out here again. now we've got to find him."
Will of the Clan Koopa Prologue
"halt members of a.m.s.unit beta and gamma, you are hereby commanded to return to the lord's keep immediately for reprimands on this attempt to flee from your royal sworn duties!"
Dire Wolf Hunt Preparation
They both paused in place before backing away, leaving the grey female without the greeting her presence demanded as the beta of the pack.
As-of-yet-Unnamed-Fantasy Ch:1
My mother was no alpha or even a beta. she was a delta wolf who'd caught my father's eye because of her beautifully pure white-as-snow wings. she held my father's heart in more ways than her beauty, though.
Chapter One
Character a is a lonely beta tester, whose primary job is to test run androids (robots with human or anthro appearance) before they are shipped out for sale to the public.
Pokemon BE Chapter 8
#8 of pokemon beta emerald new month, new chapter. we followed may's father as he led us somewhere. _i wonder where he was taking us? better question, why am i following him?