The Lost One: Changes
Okay so i am rewriting my story. i'm going to leave up the original chapters for now and i would love to get any input as to which seems better: plot, style or anything else. any comments are appreciated as always and i hope you enjoy the read! ...
One Last Gift
One Last Gift Those upon the Isle of Draconis partied into the night, getting drunk on ales of the finest age and dining upon delectable just as exquisite. The beaches seemed to rock with the delightful chirping songs of gryphons, joined by dragons...
Spirits (Part One)
"Are you gonna go or not?" Baruna looked down at the water, then at Jeru again. She got up on her toes and peered intently into the depths, her tail whipping nervously. "I...changed my mind." The young fox crossed his arms. "But you gotta, we...
Electroluxe!, Chapter One.
\>You shoulder the door behind you as you slip off your gloves and kick off your rubber boots, tossing them into the pile of work gear in the corner of your mudroom. \>Unclasping your hardhat, you toss it on the counter, running your fingers...
The Explorer Part One
_Ships Log:_ "I have come across a most fascinating situation! The planet itself is very Terran like; it's almost eerie actually. Until you realize that everything is many times greater than the size it should be! "I am going to land my ship...
Chapter Two: A Chance Encounter
'_Bleep! Bleep! Bleep!_' The sound of the digital alarm clock awoke Leo with a jolt. The young wolf sat himself up in bed to find the rays of the sun streaming in through the window. A second later, Angel stirred and hit the 'off' button on the clock....
One Fun Evening
Alriight im back!. this is my first story for a while so i decided since ive sorta taken a break, i should probably start with a short story so here it its, its quite a bit different from my others so be prepared. the following works is of all my own...
Ravaged, Chapter One
Chapter One Our Introduction Walking down the hallway. Deserted. Lonely. Just as lonely as our main canine character. That's how this story will begin. Just as it will end. Ravage dragged his ebony nails gently down the walls as he walked....
Chapter One: Quickening
Warm sea air flowed with the wind, catching blades of grass in the medows below and fluttering them like feathers. The rolling hills were covered, like mats of green placed upon the landscape by the gods themselves, stopped only by the sands of the...
Stellar Wayfarer: One
A little forward before getting this started. I've been working on this sci-fi space exploration story, and wanted to try to write it to a short list of specifications to aim for. First, I wanted to create a series of short stories that do follow...
Beau - Chapter One
_© All characters and storylines involving said characters belong to me: Eben Black._ ~~~ The snow covered roads and lanes whipped by as I traversed the mountain ranges and snaked through the beautiful, almost poetic wilderness. Lakes had been frozen...
Dawn - Chapter One
Don't flame me for the poor quality writing, I'm new to this, 'kay? On a side note, the armour worn does not match that in the relevant refs. That will come soon. * * * **_CHAPTER ONE; DAWN_** _Magdora; a planet of anthropomorphic animals. The...