Hope
Many problems arise from the pit always questioning always judging always so convincingly strong those same problems grow louder always pressing always coercive always deceiving they grow so loud; they enter into your head always critical
Finding Guawysvern
_ _the demon grimaced, his expression hidden by a dark shadow from his long bangs, the thick fabric of the gag in his mouth silencing him from responding to any of the words being spoken by his siblings, the group criticizing him for a crime that was worthy
Under The Blazing Sun (Chapter 1)
Either way, i hope you all enjoyed it, and constructive criticism is always appreciated. thanks again!
The Red-Ringed Umbreon part 3
"i could tell," he stands up, "but that not for me to criticize, the sun will be up in an hour, and we should get moving. the closest village is the one we should head for."
Her Peculiar Appendage
Then turned her head to address her critic. but not enough to take her eyes off the intruders. "not now, dammit! we have company!" the arrow-scaled extremity was quite adamant. _"hiiissssss!"_ jocasta crossed her hands.
Ekain's biography
Skills: - his tattoo increases his physical stamina by 10% in critical condition.
To Laugh Once More
Again, criticisms are welcome. thank you for reading :) the above work is copyright to ephemeral\_dreams. do not distribute/vend without express permission from the author.
14 Ways to Cope With It All
.** it's easier to be critical of a situation or a person, especially if those around you are doing so. don't let others be a negative influence on you.
Finding Myself
Constructive criticism is welcome and the only flames i want to see are the kindles of love between these two dragons. when i first allowed my eyes to gaze upon him, it was like i viewed into a mirror.
Welcome Back to Cappuccinos! Part 4
Venti's ear flattened at the criticism. _i'm over thirty years old, outweigh him by a half ton, and bench press more weight with one arm than he can with both,_ thought venti. _so how does me feel like a midget around him?_ "yessir."
A Tale of Lost Souls: Part One
I'm looking for some criticism so if you'd like to help me improve, and if you want more, message me. i may or may not keep writing it in second person, that'll depend on the response i get from this chapter.
Futile
A large chemical plant on the edge of the city suffered a critical malfunction, dumping millions of tons of bio-hazardous material into the city. the effects were terrible. ninety eight percent of the population was killed near instantly.