Out Of Time - Book 1: The Witch - Chaper 1: The beginning
Occasionally she would look to her right wrist, where she wore a bracer over it that held a lit up touchscreen panel, to which showed both the current time and date as well as any mission critical information.
Chapter 1: Beyond Reach
I'm also new here, so please give me constructive criticism if like!) the universe. what is the "universe"?
Chapter 42: Basic Training Days -2
I thank you for those who read, critics, comments, fave, watch, even rate the series so far. and i do apologize for the delay, because it is part of my hobby to write stories. i accept any comments and critics though, thank you.
"Daggers of Darkness, Book 4: An Unexpected Discovery", Prologue
I only ask that you please keep criticisms constructive and polite. story, characters, and related art © 2013-2019 ronald j. lebeck (that's me).
Changes of the eclipse: Chapter 4
#4 of changes of the eclipse: chapter 1 **here is chapter 4 and the same rules apply as the last chapter, dont hold back on criticism, every comment helps me become a better writer enjoy ^^** **chapter 4**
Prologue: A Recap to what has happened so Far
critics and comments are welcome! the earth, the world known as the home of the dragons and other unknown mythical creatures, is a big place, with countless stories told every day.
Lynn's College Adventure 2
She looked over at jake with a questioning and critical stare. "what little problem? do you really think that lynn is your mate? her boobs would be huge by now!" she said, putting her two little paw-hands upon lynn's much larger bosom.
Valentines day gift
Let's see what all you critics think. :p learning what it means, only to have all the doors closed, vainly i waited. everyday i fought, over and over again, finally at end. meeting one so pure, you picked me up with such ease.
Tail's of The Crimson Claw- Chapter 24
We received a report that this human is in possession of critical military intelligence. i am under orders from admiral silvermane to immediately transport him to headquarters for debriefing."
Lupirin: Pain - part 3
Lupirin - 'pain' part 3 story © aenzi [[email protected]](/cdn-cgi/l/email-protection) all comments/criticisms will be met accordingly with vast amounts of love. =-=-=-= adrian had his paws wrapped tightly around mariah.
New World, New Life Ch 1
.& don't worry be as critical as you want i what your honest opinion.
A Fox's Family (Part 7)
His moment was critical for curtis to understand. he was just becoming aware that regardless of the beatings, dennis never seemed to give in. he wanted to know why and these words had already begun to lay the seeds of uncertainty.