Collar
The beta carried the data pad around so everyone could see it. there were oohs and ahhs.
So Many Unexpected Things
Gcu better late than never is en-route to io orbit, emergency contact containment directive 23-beta-gamma-t-77-5 is priority! locate alien presence, subdue!
Chapter 3
A german shepherd in a lab coat came out of the room and looked around, "jeremy beta?"
The New Wolf Chapter 7
**notice to all betas, we will be having another meeting at 5 pm. all betas must attend.** why so late?" "they had work, chester. at least el understands that," he said i turned to hector, "what about you, hector? don't you have classes to teach?"
Lone Wolf - Part 2
The candles flickered as laren turned from the subservient beta to the priestess. "well, what should we do?" she asked. accalia looked at laren straight in her blue eyes and said, "find him."
Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
I'll definitely save beta readers as a topic for a following piece, but to be brief here, the feedback of others will really help you spot the parts of your story that need improvement - and not just regarding showing or telling.
The New Wolf Chapter 12
Hector whispered in my ear, "good luck," and walked out with the other betas. once all the betas were out, the alpha glared at me, "chester do you remember what i told you earlier about the drug?"
How I Meet Kara Zastle {Chapters Opening}
Now, major props goes to my beta reader, that anthro promophic gazebo! darkawry! he read through, and fixed a lot of stuff in here, while still keeping my story how it was. so i love him for that, thanks da!
Particle Cataclysm
Phil was trying to get energy readings on subatomic particles to prove that alpha particles produce more energy than beta particles...and that was the easy part.
Alpha Corgi
Walking out of the dorm building, they could all immediately tell where the alpha party was being held, a large banner was strung across the student union building with the words "alpha beta
A Fox Amongst Wolves Part 6: Sly Fox
I mean he is cute and all, but mason was our beta." so jason didn't want me there, great. "well as far as i see it he broke one of alec's main rules, a willing partner for the night. directly disobeying an alpha's rule, that's major bad news."
You promised.... (Teaser)
I am also looking for a beta reader, so if anyone is interested please contact me. for the moment, please r & r. _ . fresh, untouched snow covered the ground, shining under the bright crescent moon in the sky.