Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
'showing' is taking the same action and presenting it in a more engaging way that describes the experience by providing those actions, thoughts, feelings etc.
A Firefighter to the rescue — 02 — The Aura sight ( Reforged )
A disclaimer: all publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. the original characters and plot are the property of the author.
The Walk from Darkness to Light: Part 1
It is hard to be polite while eating with a jaw that resembles, and works, like that of a dog (wolf, coyote, fox, etc). our preference of food is for meat, breads, and other high calorie food.
Freedom Fire Prologue: That Day...
I am still in the process of writing the whole stories, but many compilations of everyday works like studying, research, afterclass activities, etc. took most of my times, so for now this is the only thing i can upload from this story.
Choose your own path Pt11
You walk through the right door, not that it apparently made any difference, and before long you are back into the boring routine of left, right,left,right etc, for about ten minutes before something wonderfully new happens...the cave stops zigzagging and
Fallout: Universal Plaything
etc. slowly, after i had made sure all of my facilities were working, i sat up. pain shot up through me again but i muscled through it, eyes opening to see what had happened to me, and where i was.
Ma'at Bio
He explained to her, via translator since she could only speak in the ancient tongue, what she was doing here, how long it had been, etc. she was heartbroken and shocked, everyone she knew and loved was gone.
School Crush : Chapter 1
I start to show jack the proper way to balance an equation, and what numbers on the periodic table meant, mass, protons, electrons, etc, all while sneaking in glances of the football star, and fantasizing about him.
Underneath the Wars
This will be incomplete, but i am hoping you will comment as i go along and help me fix my mistakes in grammar, spelling, vocabulary, logic, geography, physics, etc. anything you see that looks odd, let me know, please.
Gut punching beating
Yet i belive my shiny self encourages other species to fight me, not so bad, i like fightin' anyway it was 3 am in the morning, most species where happily sleeping, just some nocturne people where still awake, bats, possums, etc.
Dragon love
Her inside (organs, bones, etc ...) were changed completely. her transformation was completed he was now a small dragonite. dragonite opens his eyes and removes his claws from his stomach, making the light of the transformation disappear.
Central New Year #2 The Scouter's Ball
A magician might cast a spell, a fighter might make a interesting move, etc." draco commented drily. "i see. can i ask something of you later?" "certainly." draco nodded.i was thinking about my entrance.