Break, or How I Became A Superhero
:p update: i've revised the story, added about seven hundred more words. enjoy. :p ==== my name is break and i am a superhero. god, how arrogant does that sound? but it's true (after a fashion).
I'm Alien or a Time-Traveller... or something. (Six)
#6 of an alien so here's a slightly revised and vastly added to version of this. the original posting was a bit weak and thanks goes to orkinman for pointing out the problem. anyway, here's something better.
Valkyrie - Book 2 - Chapter 1 - Night (Re-edited and Reworked)
#1 of valkyrie - book 2 - the guiding light (revised and re-edited) chapter 1 - night terra was a broken world. the planet had suffered numerous failed resistances against the power of the asgard.
Junior Year: The End
I'll go back and do revisions when i have the time for it. thank you to everyone who has read and rated and reviewed. it really makes a world of difference to me, to hear feedback. i hope you enjoyed it, and i hope you're content with the ending.
Valkyrie - Book 1 - Chapter 11 - The Culling of Chentrilla (Revised Edition)
#11 of valkyrie - book 1 - fate and rebirth (revised and reedited) chapter 11 - the culling of chentrilla location: new haven new haven was a small town that lay on the edge of the chentrilla delta.
Valkyrie - Book 1 - Chapter 6 - Darkness Rising (Revised Edition)
#6 of valkyrie - book 1 - fate and rebirth (revised and reedited) chapter 6 - darkness rising location: everonth excavation site the ship jolted again, it felt as if a herd of elephants were pounding the side of the vessel and that the ground beneath them
Chapter 3: Revalation or Denial?
I have to revise my plans now." yamizephyr observed. yamizephyr teleported away. xenorosth was shaken. xenorosth stood there in the woods, unsure of what to do. he was tired of these meaningless fights.
Spyro: Return of Darkness, Chapter 11 -- Eternity Begins Today
I might put up a revised version of this, who knows...
The Lead Crown: Ch 6c, Ghosts of the Past (Pt 3)
The wolf-dog quickly revised whatever he was going to say, "so... out the back?" sada nodded, "out the back."
Young Loves Demise: Chapter One
I didn't like the way it was going, and i was never particularly proud of the first chapter, but the rest of it was just in need of some revisions and a different path. never did finish it, only a couple of chapters into it before i basically gave up.
The Pillow Book of Sethira: Prologue and Translator's Note
**a/n:** last revised 3/11/2023; mild grammatical edits, nothing major. * * * sleepiness and boredom lingered in the air of the athenaeum like a fog, making the eyelids of all patrons and staff heavy as they inhaled the noxious air.
Writing Advice: Before You Write
Editing, polishing, and revising until it got there. but, this idea of 'genius' lingers because it's an appealing fantasy in popular culture, and a bit of a marketing gimmick too. don't fall for it.