Peer Mentoring
This was by far the most heavily-revised episode you guys have seen so far. however, i'm happy with how it came out!
(Contest Winner) The Alphaçade: Chapter 1 - Ride
I was able to revise a lot of inconsistencies and weird wording. # **alphaçade** chapter 1: the ride ten sets of different-colored eyes followed me as they reflected the light from the underground rail entrance.
Tropical Revised - Chapter Four
Sleeping quite peacefully, Rye resented the fact that his alarm clock brought him back from the realm of dreams. Tossing around on the sofa, he couldn't escape the blaring sound of the alarm clock. "Alarm, off," he said, preventing the annoying sound...
Chapter 25: Arena Patrol - Part 1
Al took some notes on all the materials the teacher revised. during a short break period, he looked out in to the sky blankly feeling empty from renamon's rejection. vinnie called him but he didn't notice or listen. she walk toward him and called.
Don't Need to Be Afraid
The story you see here is actually a revised version of the one on fanfiction.net. i made grammatical corrections, made the sentences flow better, and overall just tweaked and fixed a bunch of things in it that bothered me.
Tribe Wars (revised)
"Reaper, you ok? REAPER! Some one get me a medic!" Reaper looked up at some voice, but what it was saying or who it was he couldn't tell. In fact, he couldn't tell a lot of things right now. His vision was blurry, and he heard more of a ringing in...
Rhidian's Offer: Revised Edition
Thumbnail © wildkitfox lyrics for raw/tân © the alarm _rhidian's offer_ by adrastos onca thumbnail by wildkitfox lyrics from _raw_/_tân_ © the alarm originally written: 4th of march 2022 revised
Rekuiem's Oddest Christmas Party
If there are spelling mistakes, forgive me, i revised as best i could, if you could please point out the mistake.
The making of a book cover - A heresy story
Not to mention that a bit of distance means that you end up doing _yet another_ revision in order to appease that nagging detail-gremlin in your ear. ## **final words** sd is like a puzzle with a variety of solutions, and my approach isn't universal, though
MoonDust, Chapter 1
Without their willingness to put up with my sloppy revisions and an angsty, complaining caribou, this book would be nowhere near as good as it is.
Blood, Sweat, and Diesel: Chapter 15 (Revised)
I forgot where I was for a moment when I woke up the next morning. I was lying alone on a bed, but I had no memory of climbing into it. I sat up, and noted with more than a little surprise that I was completely naked. It was only after I sat for a...
Pact Chapter 2: Bar Fight Part 1
Also as a heads up, chapter 3 will be delayed due to revision and of course sex scene ;) also big shout out to my buds who helped me with this! editor jon sanders beta reader razukai still looking for one more beta reader!