Federal Holiday (Act1, Book2, Chapter15)

"you're not putting me on house arrest, jim. i'm going to ambush the people coming after me. the playground bullies can go after whoever they want.

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The Other Side Of Summer

In the afternoon, he came down to where i was working, again accompanied by jim. "dave, you've met ted before," jim said, seeming a bit more at ease, perhaps because he had time to get use to the notion.

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Jim's Night Out ("Jim and the Frog" series, #2)

"the horse drank two bottles, but jim didn't drink a single drop.. the horse mocked jim for this, implying we were "babysitting the little boy", and apparently jim has some sort of complex regarding his puppy face...we haven't hung out ever since".

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Writing Tips vol. 4

For example: jim nodded, happy he had gotten his point across. unless jim is the pov character, this is an omniscient statement. it's very easy to do. this only works if you are writing a true omniscient point of view.

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The Shadows Of The Night

jim asked john, who nodded. tyo punched the leader right in the face as jim and john started to pummel the two followers with hits. the leader roundhouse kicked tyo back, connecting with his snout.

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Freeing and Bringing Back

Then jim ran again and went straight to hyp's body. mutt and nod followed, and in the way came face to face with loc, who was staring at them with wide eyes.

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Father figure Chapter 7 - Aftermath

She scolds at him ignoring her, jim continues to walk while taking some time to dust of his clothes. jim's mom opens the car door, making the young lion dash into the distance once again.

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Chptr. 4 Lets go home.

jim had noticed that the wolf wasn't talking much or even eating much for that menu. of course, he had cut back alot on eating because of his want to slim out.

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Warrior's Blood, Chapter 18: Time For Departure

"bye, jim." dave hung up, then stared at the phone and sighed. poor jim. i'm sorry i lied to you, he thought. but i had to. the rest of the day passed in a sort of blur.

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Taste of Fire: Pestilence

jim said with a grin. "what makes you say that?" alex asked giving him a curious glance. "well, it's just that no boots have been shoved up our asses yet." jim laughed at his own joke.

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Gone and Come Home Ch.6

jim said. toby stood up and opened the door. "see you guys down there." he said as he left, leaving the door open for me and jim.

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Realms of Fantasy Chapter 1: Goblins and Drakes and Jim, Oh My!

“listen, jim, just put the gun down and let me han-“ “how do you know my name?!” great; i think i’d have had better luck bargaining with the wire eating goblin than jim.

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