Sixam’s Razor, A Christmas Tail
It all depends, as always, on the feedback i get. if this does not suit your fancy or you are underage for this material, please stop reading here. if not, do continue and enjoy.
Part one- The woman
\*\*\*\*as this is my first story on yiffstar please give me feedback. love it, hate it, not care to much. i really dont care what the feedback.
Break A Leg Chapter Two
Well feel free to leave me feedback via e-mail or on aim, jimfoxhart
Dragons Never Burn (Prologue Idea)
I just want to get some feedback before i get this whole thing rolling. constructive criticism is very much appreciated! i'm a dragon. i'm an old dragon, with many things to teach.
a little philosophy, or rather quotes, about life and good and bad things.
#1 of philosophy just a collection of some things i wrote recently, i know my placing of: , is wrong but i put it in that way to make it more readable, not to be grammatically perfect. and if you can suggest any tags or provide me with feedback or rate, it
Teasing the Guard - Story Excerpt
#1 of story excerpts the excerpt isn't very long, but i would appreciate any feedback. this is the first story i have ever posted here, so you can be critical, just don't tear me to pieces please?
Crunch The berserk: prolouge
feedback is welcome, both negative and posative. thanks. thid is the strange story of a creature from the swamp. he is a alligator furry, and looks like any other of his kind. large, reptilian, and built for huntung in the swamps he calls home.
Cold
It was a good challenge at the time and i got a lot of great feedback from it. to be honesty it's not inherently furry, this was before i was attempting anthro writing. "we were told to hold on, but we couldn't."
The Mute - Chapter 4.5: Clearing Things Up
As always, feedback and ratings are much appreciated! <3 - moocat * * * time: september 10th, 9:00 * * * i woke up with my pillow moist from tears. it took a few moments to gather my thoughts... ...but then i remembered what kyle said last night.
Realm of Shadows (working title)
Tell me what you think all feedback is helpfull even if its crap and needs to be scrapped, thanks
Notes - Prologue
Any and all feedback is appreciated! so, please tell me exactly how good or bad this piece of writing was! thanks, -otto_von otto hadn't known him for very long, but he imagined himself in his arms every night.
SENTIENCE - Prologue
I love feedback. the plan is to release chapters once a week, maybe sooner for the first one. oh yeah, and this will be safe for work in terms of sexual content, which i guess is new for me on here. love you all.