The Woodland Visitor Ch 22: The Fate of the World
Enjoy, and as always, feedback is appreciated. the woodland visitor ch 22: the fate of the world everyone gathered in the council room by brenah's invitation.
Alliance
#2 of fire and shadow:part 1 this is a story that was made by rawg98 of fanfiction .net. he has let me post it here so that he can get some more feedback. so please review.
Somewhere Out There Act 20 - Drown
I'm irritated from the lack of feedback, and i'm just convinced right now that this will go completely unheard. completely unanswered. completely ignored. i post my stories on five different sites.
Burdens - Chapter 79: Addiction
When he wanted feedback, he got it. when he asked questions, there were answers. it was refreshing. it was not exactly normal, he was told, but it was not uncommon. he knew plenty like him.
Sutopia, Ch 14
feedback mitigation can resume at any time. regulation of a corpus' biological responses and reaction to local stimuli is a basic function of any implant." logan slowly explored that answer.
Chapter 4
Don't forget to leave feedback, you guys can criticize me, i won't get mad! i always appreciate advice on how to be better. thanks!!! i had finally gotten started on the frame of the body of the picture i was starting when the last bell rang.
Galaxy: part 6
We analyzed the feedback we got from them and discovered it was from what we believe is their long range communication system. we tapped into their channel and announced ourselves.
The Mute - Chapter 4: A Walk in the Park
And as always, feedback is much appreciated! (sorry for the cliffhanger) <3 - moocat i woke up with kyle's image in my mind, as i slowly remembered last night's dream.
A Chance Meeting
#1 of fire and shadow:part 1 this is a story that was made by rawg98 of fanfiction .net. he has let me post it here so that he can get some more feedback. so please review. you want to hear a story?
Sweet Revenge
So feedback please!! and if you spot any misspelling please point it out. i can't believe it six years....six whole years wow i really need to check up on mary and the gang.
Titanfall: blaze of glory
Hey ladies and gents, this is my first ever story i post on this site. please throw some criticism and feedback my way, i plan on turning this to a series later. i would like to thank erik2000 for giveing me the jump start i needed to start writing here
Vast, Our World and Our Resolve - Prologue
I am open to and grateful for constructive feedback! thanks again, and enjoy.