Ander - Part 5: Subchapter 21
fast paws! fast paws!" "are you insane? wardo'll tear him apart!" "no, wardo's too old to fight!" "shut your mouth! or do you want them to come and chop off your claws, too!?" "i don't want to bend my knee to some pup half my age! booo!!"
Divine: Chapter 2
He needed to deploy to chute now before he was too fast, he was already too fast now, it might rip the chute from the ship, but might would turn into will shortly.
Sedentary
The cub squeaked out, snatching the ball as fast as he could and then scampering back towards his friends.
Writing Tips
You want to avoid being overly descriptive, as blow by blow gets old really fast. however, you also need to give your readers a good idea of what is happening.
Ander - Part 4: Subchapter 47
The switches came so fast he was barely able to keep up with his eyes, turning her into a flickering blur of tree bark brown and sunset gold.
SATAM: Internal Conflict - Chapter One
The fox was already in the air, catching hold of her wrists and carrying her over the rail in one whip-fast movement. they descended hard and fast, a tiring tails letting sally go, at her request, several feet above the ground.
A Biography of a Human: "Taken"
Run as fast and far as you can and hide!" i stood there silent and unable to move or even think.
The Legend of Spyro: Origins_Chapter 22
The young soldier only nodded before sprinting away as fast as his legs could carry him. he even completely forgot that he had a radio with the fast pace and the heat of the moment. parker turned toward his men.
For Better or Worse - Chapter 2: Found Love
For one moment sam thought that he saw a glowing light emanating from behind him, but the glowing left just as fast as it appeared. he turned around. the other worlds shop was still there.
The Gay Goth Dog: CHAPTER 15: Why Do They Pick On Huskies? (part one)
I looked over at seth and he was fast asleep against the window. "never knew that a cat can fall asleep so fast." i chuckled. "you should see him when he sleeps at night; fucker takes up the whole bed!"
The Legend of Spyro: Path of Delusions Book I Chapter 6
The felines are fast and they know the valley like nobody else but it's not always enough to survive.
The Turning Part 1
I wrenched my shoulder loose and bolted as fast as i could, trying to get past his companions, but they were too fast. faster than i even thought possible. one tackled me to the ground with a deep, throaty, animal-like growl, and my world went black.