The Day And Llife Of An Umbreon-Preview
Ok sofurry this is my first story i dont mind any comments please be honest i would like to say thank you to my best mate jack (you will find him later in the story) and anyone whos given me ideas and so on.
Suicide: Prologue Remade
As i promised last year, i am going to be remaking my first story series. as you can read from the title it the prologue right now. if you want, you can look back at the old version and compare.
Inner Struggle-prologue
#3 of inner struggle #### ** warning:** _ this is my first story written in forever so take it easy on the criticism this story contains romantic situations between gay anthropomorphic fictional characters, and if you don't recommend this to
I'm almost done!?
**as of right now, i'm almost done with my rough draft of my first story. i think it's ok. but i really would appreciate it if i could get your thoughts on my story.**
Star Fox Chronicles: Prologue: A new arrival
Thanks for reading, this is my first story i ever wrote so i'm not expecting it to be good. but please tell me what you think and provide me some advice for the next part. thanks.
In Spyro's World. The Wish
Alright this is my first story i wrote it in one night on my ipod so i'm super tired i need feed back for what's next and also you get too choose what the black figure is.
Shadows Bleeding From The Light:Introduction
This is my first story here, and i'm pretty much making it up as i go along. i really appreciate any comments or advice and i'm always open to suggestions. i'm only saying this once, pokemon is owned by nintendo, i own nothing, blah blah blah.
The Great War - Part One
This is my first story here, so if you have constructive criticism or some praise, send it to me. part 1 - first contact the day was surprisingly good for first lieutenant mitchel.
You know that
my first story, enjoy this is my first story (sorry if it's not very good), enjoy. damien was terrified. damien was an eighteen year old wolf; about six foot three with light grey fur and deep dark blue eyes.
Dragon Storm: Chapter 1: Enter Rio and Lazz!
#1 of dragon storm author's note: hey everyone, this is going to be my first story, so if you see anything wrong i do apologize. also i am unsure what rules must be met before gaining an approval, but i will try my best.
The Transformation
This is my first story so take it easy on me.
The Journey to Acceptance Pt. 1 Reworked
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