Raven Wolf - Book 05 - Chapter 03
Eve nods her head,also speaking to him lowly as to not be heard. "yeah, and you're the murdering thief responsible for city destruction that the military is looking for." "i've no idea of what you're talking about."
A Christmas Special
Dom gives a quiet "oh", and the conversation falls to a comfortable lull. good, i don't feel like talking about either of them anymore. ...i'm tired. "dad?" max responds with a "yes?"
Sealed Lips
I went back and forth a bit on how to do the dragon's speech, before settling on horrible misspellings to try and convey the 'his speech is so garbled nobody understands it' idea.
Raven Wolf - Origins - Shiya - Chapter 04
Unlike his father achak would always talk, in fact he didn't have to even be around anyone to be talking, achak practically just as content with talking to himself as he was with other people, his constant conversation helped me to overcome my own quietness
The Lemonade Stand - Ch.1 (Read description first)
During out loud dialog there will be "...she said...." or "...he said..." or something of that sort.
Ryt's Rants #2
Ryt is speaking to them. "i can't believe some of the atrocities i've seen in the worlds i've been too." panel 2 lighting a cigarette ryt continues speaking.
Neighborhood Relationships
As we left my mom started talking to laina. even though me and dan were in my room we could still hear the conversation between my mother and laina.
Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
Sometimes when there's lots of speech going on and people are just talking normally, you need to just add it in with the speech tags so readers keep track of who is speaking. rather than potentially, all those 'saids' getting turned into different words.
The Card Master Chapter 1
After arriving at the speech, he sat through it, barely paying attention. however one part of the speech catches his ears. "there are cards in our world, some that very few will live to tell of.
Change in Venue- November
The president stops speaking for a moment to collect himself before speaking up again. "as are all of you i find myself very frustrated at our inability to prevent these incidences nor have we been able to find anyone who we can prove is responsible.
Static Memory Record 86-75309
I'd had such poor luck speaking with the human staff i had become concerned that all the finagling my owner had done to get me into the hospital in the first place would've been all for naught. i should've thought of talking to the equipment sooner!
A new school year
They spent the whole time before first period talking, and yuukan found he was looking forward to the school year.