Demeaned
This piece is about a message and i would always like some feedback. a fox stands in front of a mirror and considers his own image. he looks at his black tipped ears and touches one of them, parting the hairs that meet there.
Their Echoes
This is a first and feel free to critique, give feedback and tell me what you think! thank you for checking out this story, i hope you enjoy it. the snow leopard's ears flicked along to the beat to the old clock.
Rebirth And Resurgence - Introduction
A lot of positive feedback. a lot of comments along the lines of 'wow. great aesthetic.' 'not sure how i got 'harpy' but lol.' 'so accurate!! too true!' at least the feedback was good, she mused. the comments following up others were the odd ones though.
Mightyena Vore story
Please don't give feedback on the quality. i wrote this back in october 2013 or something like that. i got more to come for vore stories! ^^ and yes, i am human in this story. not a mew.
Mew's love Pt.3
I've been trying to make the chapter's longer but im still a beginer story maker and i like them nice and small to begin with so hope you like it please feedback is incredible and i would like to see some comment's on what i should be doing with this
Alone
feedback is appreciated, as always. am i alone?
Thing
feedback is appreciated, as always. what is this sensation that i feel? is it a figment of delusion or is it truly real?
Darkness
I will appreciate any feedback. darkness inside me, constantly fighting, barely winning, this fight is always, happening silently.
Dragons Tale Chapter 1 Unexpected Gifts Part 1 of 6
feedback is how i advance my writing and idea's. i am just human. so i tend to make many mistakes. feed back is loved. trolling... not so much.
i'm a scarecrow, not jesus
*\*a/n: unlike nearly all my writing on here, this one has no yiff in it. this is actually a suicide oneshot. i'm taking a breather from all the sex. this is not within the timeline of the rest of the oneshots. it's just randomly here. as always, i crave feedback
Through Hell and Back: Prologue: WAR!
I'm also requesting feedback on details on the next chapters. if you donn't tell me what you liked or disliked, i can't make this any better. tell me if there is too much or too little detail or if the story needs to speed up or slow down.
That's what I need, A human to rescue me.....
Please leave feedback and even give suggestions of where you think the story should lead ^\_\_^ !