Lavender Scent (Poem)
I'd be happy to take and critique even though it's an older work, always looking to improve. lavender scent drifts palely into the room, as sun and moon trade places in the sky. sadness shall find nothing here but doom.
Blue Porch Swing (Poem)
She cannot improve if she doesn't know what's wrong. please enjoy! ======== a beautiful house where the bluebirds sing. it's white with blue trim and a blue porch swing.
A poem, this is
Why doesn't it hurt anymore, is it an improvement? have the wounds finally healed, ready to start fresh. my sight grows ever wose, would i ask for vision. even so i breathe, live and eat.
MoonDust, Chapter 5
Washing out frightened her, but what more could she do to improve? her mother's parting words echoed through her mind. had signing up been a terrible mistake?
Calling (Poem)
She cannot improve if she doesn't know what's wrong. please enjoy! ================ the birds are singing far away. they're like an echo in my mind.
Concept Ideas for a story
It's in the planning stage, so if you have any suggestions, questions, or critique please tell me so that i know just where to improve. here is a quick description of the plot, characters, and the kind of themes and fetishes it might include.
Little Wolf, Big Ordeal CH. 11 & 12
I knew i improved my swimming, but i didn't know how much you all improved yours. i needed to observe a bit, then wait a bit, and finally--' 'use the element of surprise to beat you, haha!' chuck squawked, finishing charlie's sentence.
Heartless Dragon 2 Weapons of War(re-edited)
He was trying to build a replica of the dragons suits only he wanted to improve it to expose any mistakes. he never wanted to be part of this but he wanted to help all the dragons of any costs.
Red Sun and Moon Colliding: Chapter Zero
Dime has been improving again, with the knowledge we won't fail. i.. i think she's starting to take a liking to me; she always seems happier when we're together. and i think i like her too.
Jason's Nightmare - Part 8 [Jason's Story]
Sarah evolved into a gardevoir a few months before that so her psychic capabilities have immensely improved. i also managed to evolve into a lucario making my combat capabilities improve greatly as well.
Tales of the Huntsville Mayors #11- Mid-Season Suspicions
And if you're wondering why, i'll sum it up in one word: improvement. every other team has seen how we work together, and have learned to adapt themselves to our game.
The Eyes
Take a read and if you have one or two minutes add a comment about it so i can improve. i like hearing other people's thoughts. other then that more non poems will be coming soon. (in less then eight months. promise). enjoy the poem.