Shattered Glass Chapter 13: History Repeats Itself
It looked very much like a high class yacht exponentially expanded and improved.
In My Time of Need - Chapter 1 (Redo)
I realized i was missing a lot of backstory and the escape plan was not very well though out, so this time around there are a lot of improvements. and so with this redo of chapter 1 i hope we can have a fresh start with the new story!
Spyro's Old Flame: Chapter 4 - Spyro's Whole New Flame
"but then you started really improving. i mean, really _really_ improving! you learned how to glide and fighting and everything. and then after that, i've mostly just been feeling angry about this whole thing..." flame tilted his head. "angry?
Loveless Incantation: Chapter 5
“this is a place for improvement, not killing. so i expect the same courtesy from you here as well. if you wish to improve on your weaknesses, then take off your armor. otherwise, leave.” my instincts are telling me to leave.
A Cruel Fate
Please tell me how it was and what could be improved. thud! the body of a hero's only son hit the concrete hard as lightning flashed throughout the village hidden in the leaves, blood splattering on the ground from his wound.
Project Warblade: Chapter 4
Feel free to leave a comment, your critque helps me improve! the metallic collar around vincent's neck felt as tight and constricting as one would expect.
Chapter 4- Stepping off on the wrong foot
I got most improve, most inspiring and most positive. everybody was cheering and it seems that everything in the world, bad or good, was waiting and watching me.
After the Storm - Part 23 [Looking Back]
His next lesson from his father was more of physical improvements: improving his running and dodging abilities, jumping and landing, even his kicks.
Invane: Laster Von Minites
“i just needed you guys to improve him." “are you not the robot worker?"
United Through Two Worlds Chapter 4
#4 of united through two worlds this is a story that's still being written, and these first chapters are rather shakey, so i ask you to be patient and read up to the current chapter (chapter 15 at the time of posting) to see just how much i;ve improved while
Chapter 2: Origin
One of electricity to control the weather at least partially to aid the creatures in their crops, plants, shelters, and improving the days and nights of all.
Coexistence
Her arms started growing larger and thicker, their musculature improving as her biceps popped out huger and huger alongside her triceps. her deltoids swelled with power, rising to spherical proportions to hug her neck.